I decided to experiment with the use of fairy lights as well as the cultural reference of the Manchester Bee.
"I like the use of the lights; however, I believe that it isn't entirely necessary as it may look more professional without the fade of the two images. Also, the placement of 'Your Illuminations' could be suited better on the other side of the poster." - Grace Ball, Year 13
However, I decided through my own analysis, as well as further audience feedback, that the original image was more fitting to the aesthetic and looked more professional.
I asked further peers to show their opinions for the two designs to consolidate my decision of the second design. Here are my results:
1) /// 3
2) ///////////////// 17


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